Thursday 27 September 2012
Archimedia
Wow! "That was amazing". On the 6th of September, Room 12 & 11 were invited to share their ideas with people from the firm Archimedia, it was exciting. We had to share our ideas with the Archmedia people because they had asked us for our help on what we thought of putting in that space next to the G.I. Library and the car park near the G.I community centre. We wrote about what we would like to have together with the music & arts centre. We had so many ideas & some of them had some same ideas. We had to see who got the most ideas so that they could stand up & share. In my group there was Charlie & Evelyn. Lindsey had picked me to share some of my ideas. There was one great idea that Charlie & I had & it was to have a church near the community centre. He had said that was a cool idea so he said if he could have our piece of work that we had done so that he could record it. We were happy so then it was going to the end. It was so cool sharing with them.
Tuesday 11 September 2012
Speech
We have been learning to write and present our speeches. We had to persuade the audience to think our way. The Olympics was our theme.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, conterminous our conclusion.
I think my introduction was amazing. Because it caught the listeners attention, but I need more powerful words & humour. I knew I had correct pronunciation and a bit of a clear voice. I really used appropriate words and vocabulary. My conclusion was great, it balanced the introduction and also restates the issue & confirms the speakers view point.
I have learnt how to write metaphors in my story, use strong powerful words and have really good humour.
I have learnt how to use good metaphors and make strong and good points.
I been learning how to use strong powerful words in my story. Having a great word that is powerful.
Using humor in your writing would be really good and will be a really great story for people to read as well and as you use them people can get the picture as you write humor words.
The criteria we had to use to write and present our speech included, an introduction, delivery, conterminous our conclusion.
I think my introduction was amazing. Because it caught the listeners attention, but I need more powerful words & humour. I knew I had correct pronunciation and a bit of a clear voice. I really used appropriate words and vocabulary. My conclusion was great, it balanced the introduction and also restates the issue & confirms the speakers view point.
I have learnt how to write metaphors in my story, use strong powerful words and have really good humour.
I have learnt how to use good metaphors and make strong and good points.
I been learning how to use strong powerful words in my story. Having a great word that is powerful.
Using humor in your writing would be really good and will be a really great story for people to read as well and as you use them people can get the picture as you write humor words.
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